I'll comment on here so people can see and maybe add to this.
1) I thought this dialogue would happen between siblings(?) Otherwise, dad should say "your sis prevented..." not "sis prevented..."
2) The red bubbles seem distant from the dialogue stream, it doesn't look like they came from the wide chatter pool but as separate conversation (like a separate window on iChat, so it's completely cut off from another window). Should they move closer to the dialogue stream?
3) The black background looks like night-club, I know we've talked about this in class like how this is kind of the general way of approaching feed stream. Though the color really pops and works well, I'm not sure about the dark......
I'll comment on here so people can see and maybe add to this.
ReplyDelete1) I thought this dialogue would happen between siblings(?) Otherwise, dad should say "your sis prevented..." not "sis prevented..."
2) The red bubbles seem distant from the dialogue stream, it doesn't look like they came from the wide chatter pool but as separate conversation (like a separate window on iChat, so it's completely cut off from another window). Should they move closer to the dialogue stream?
3) The black background looks like night-club, I know we've talked about this in class like how this is kind of the general way of approaching feed stream. Though the color really pops and works well, I'm not sure about the dark......
That's all! Great job anyway :)